Business letter writing
A business letter is a formal external message. Use a standard layout, a clear subject line, and the 7 Cs: clear, concise, correct, courteous, complete, concrete, considerate.
Parts of a business letter (full block layout)
This is a common order. Conventions vary a little: some firms place the subject line above the salutation, and the reference may sit beside the date. Be consistent.
- 1LetterheadCompany name, address, phone, email and website.
- 2Referencee.g. Our ref: PUR/2026/118. Helps filing and replies.
- 3Datee.g. 15 October 2026.
- 4Inside addressName, title, company and address of the receiver.
- 5SalutationDear Mr Bandara / Dear Sir or Madam.
- 6Subject lineA short heading saying what the letter is about.
- 7BodyOpening (purpose), middle (details), closing (action wanted and goodwill).
- 8Complimentary closeYours sincerely (named person) or Yours faithfully (Sir/Madam).
- 9Signature blockSignature, typed name, job title.
- 10Enclosures and copiesEncl.: list of attached documents; cc: other receivers.
Common layouts
Full block layout is often used with open punctuation (no commas after the salutation or close). Mixed punctuation is also accepted if used consistently.
Types of business letters
| Type | Purpose | Key content |
|---|---|---|
| Enquiry | To ask for information, prices or samples | What you need, quantity, by when |
| Order | To buy goods or services | Item, quantity, price, delivery date, payment terms |
| Complaint (claim) | To report a problem with goods or service | Facts, order details, effect, what you want done |
| Adjustment | To reply to a complaint | Apology or explanation, the action taken, goodwill |
| Sales | To persuade a customer to buy | Attention, interest, desire, action (AIDA) |
| Application | To apply for a job | Post, qualifications, experience, request for interview |
The 7 Cs of good business writing
- Clear: one idea per sentence, simple words.
- Concise: no unnecessary words or repetition.
- Correct: accurate facts, figures, grammar and spelling.
- Courteous: polite and respectful, even in a complaint.
- Complete: answers all questions and gives all needed details.
- Concrete: specific facts and figures, not vague claims.
- Considerate: written from the reader's point of view (the “you” attitude).
Direct and indirect plans
Example: a complaint letter
Nimal Perera, Purchasing Manager of Kumbuk Tea Traders (Pvt) Ltd (a fictional company), Kandy, ordered 5,000 printed tea cartons from Nelum Packaging (Pvt) Ltd (also fictional), Ratmalana, under order no. KT/0921. They arrived on 12 October 2026, a week late, and 600 cartons were crushed. Write the letter to the Sales Manager, Mr Ruwan Bandara, step by step.
- Letterhead: Kumbuk Tea Traders (Pvt) Ltd, with the Kandy address, phone and email.
- Ref: PUR/2026/118. Date: 15 October 2026.
- Inside address: Mr Ruwan Bandara, Sales Manager, Nelum Packaging (Pvt) Ltd, Ratmalana.
- Salutation: Dear Mr Bandara
- Subject: Late delivery and damaged cartons, order no. KT/0921
- Opening paragraph (purpose): “I am writing about our order no. KT/0921 for 5,000 printed tea cartons, which was due on 5 October 2026.”
- Middle paragraph (facts): “The cartons arrived on 12 October, one week late. On checking, we found that 600 of the 5,000 cartons were crushed and cannot be used. Photographs are enclosed.”
- Closing paragraph (action and goodwill): “Please replace the 600 damaged cartons by 22 October 2026, as we need them for an export shipment. We have valued your service for many years and hope this can be settled quickly.”
- Complimentary close: Yours sincerely
- Signature block: signature, Nimal Perera, Purchasing Manager.
- Encl.: copy of delivery note; 4 photographs.
Full block layout with letterhead, ref, date, inside address, salutation and subject line; a three-paragraph body (purpose → facts → action plus goodwill); “Yours sincerely” because the receiver is named; signature block and enclosures. Firm but courteous.
Sri Lankan exporters, such as tea and spice traders, write formal letters to overseas buyers and to their banks. Many Sri Lankan government offices still expect a formal letter with a reference number for requests, and replies quote that reference.
Essay: “Explain the layout of a business letter and draft a letter of complaint to a supplier.” List and explain the parts in order, then draft a full block letter with a subject line and a three-paragraph body: purpose, facts, action.
Structured question: “Explain the 7 Cs of effective business writing.” Name each C and give a one-line explanation with a short example of good and poor wording.
Short answer: “When do you use ‘Yours faithfully’ and ‘Yours sincerely’?” ‘Yours faithfully’ after ‘Dear Sir/Madam’; ‘Yours sincerely’ when you address the reader by name.
Sir → faithfully; Name → sincerely. Body in three parts: why I write → the facts → what I want. Check the 7 Cs before you send.